For context:
So, the placid rower scorns the rest of us, Who, though we think that meter's great, yet trust There's worth in wading out into the sea, Surrendering to singing waves, which, free From churning motion of your oars, can raise And draw the swimmer to where Tethys plays, Inviting him into the ancient dance Of older rhythms than the crafted trance Which chains the rower to his manmade seat, While he his artificial stroke repeats. Ulysses was a sailor, wasn't he? Or so the story goes. It seems to me He had a lot of ships, a fleet, in fact-- How many of those boats came home intact? Did oars, or hulls, or masterful design Preserve the sailors whom they left behind? Only Odysseus made it back again With no ships, no oars, and no rowing men; He steered a battered raft, lashed from trees He'd ripped up by the roots, deaf to the pleas Of the goddess who'd offered him her bed. He didn't hear a single word she'd said, But in his hands, he felt the tear of bark And rub of rope, as, shaping trunks, he marked And notched and bound and fashioned out a raft From no schematic, save the inner craft That kept him working under sun and star And tore his hands and drove in every scar: He worked to make a ship to take him home And fashioned form by inner force alone, Ignoring, as I've said, Calypso's cries-- What was the poem? Her words? Or the blood dried Across his knuckles, cracked from fighting wood To wrestle out a ship with which he could Return to Ithaca, though little more Than flotsam carried him back to his shore. Rower, without your boat, what would you do? Your ship goes down: have you Ulysses' tools? Can you make meaning out of ancient oaks Or cross the ocean, not with fettered strokes, But feeling every pitch of common speech? You find yourself unmoored, shore out of reach–– Have you Ulysses' craft, through twists and turns, To tend, and still for greater knowledge yearn? It's neither vessels nor the men at oars Who sail the darkened sea; it's something more: The mind that makes the ship and sets the beat To which the rowers keep in narrow seats, Which steers a course through beasts with many heads (The things that snatch a poem and leave it dead, Like arrogance, or useless ornaments, Or holding back the words that should be spent) And the foaming pool that drags a reader down: We read a poem for truth; if none be found, Then certainly the rowers know their job, But what should live beneath the poem is lost. Can you lay claim to such a captain mind? Have you left scars across your hands as signs Of struggling, fighting to compose some craft, That can become a reader's final raft? If you can claim this gift, then scorn the traits By which the free-man sails those treacherous straits.
I agree with this a lot, Olivia - thanks for writing so eloquently about the need for this inner force or truth ‘beneath the poem’. A lot of poetry readers - not to mention poets - weirdly seem to not see that that is quite the main thing. That’s how it seems to me, at any rate. The sound and rhyme and all of ‘Ulysses’s tools’ serve the deeper meaning. It is what makes dead wood - or as you say ancient oaks - sing - which is, of course, exactly what the Druids and Celtic Bards did.
Lustrous.