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Shannon Hood's avatar

I love this. Beautifully written!

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Olivia Marstall's avatar

Thank you!

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James Hart's avatar

Wonderful sonnet, Olivia. Kind of an easy trap to fall into today, I think. Modern life seems to have a natural tendency to turn us selfish while also treating it as a kind of virtue. Really like how you explored what that can look like (and how ridiculous it can be!).

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Olivia Marstall's avatar

Thank you! 100% agree; great point about the virtue of selfishness. I help out at the youth ministry at my church and the speaker last night was talking about how prayer reorients us to see God and others as persons, not objects of use. :)

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Darlene Moore Berg's avatar

Those first four lines! Powerful

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Zane Paxton's avatar

The ending is really powerful. Love the volta!

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Olivia Marstall's avatar

Thank you!

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Jonathan McCallum's avatar

word

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